kippurbird | Flipping through the first couple of pages of Maximun Ride...

Okay.

Just a note.

Look.

Two to three pages of what has to be five hundred words? Does not a chapter make. It's not even a scene for god's sake. Okay. It's going up to the high point of the scene without resolving anything thus requiring you to turn the page never mind the fact that you don't seem to resolve it.

Sure it makes things go quickly but it also feels like you don't know how to finish things off.

And do you have wings or don't you?

How are you running around in a night gown if you have wings? What sort of stupid evil scientist has people with wings and doesn't clip them? We clip our parakeet's wings and we're not evil! ... well, the evil and the clipping of the parakeet's wings have nothing to do with each other in this case. And if you're going to create wolf/human hybrid things why are you calling them erasers? It sounds like that Arnold Schwarzenegger movie.

Okay. So it was more than just a note.

It was several notes.