With Pictures!
Mar. 17th, 2008 11:01 pmThis Chapter is NOT SAFE FOR WORK!!
Now, normally these things aren't safe for brains, but this one is also NSFW.
Chapter Nine
My knowledge of sex is learned mostly from fan fiction, sex books and things my mother has told me even though I wish she didn't. Therefor, I will fully admit that I know nothing. However, this will not stop me! I'll just comment on the images and things like that. Also, point and laugh.
Raincoats ready?
Our chapter begins with, "The Ardeur came and the clothes went. The custom-made leather knife sheath ripped away with all the rest. We fell to the carpet naked, all hands and mouths."
This is what I see when I read that:

It's this quivering mass of... bloby hands and mouths... no genitals or separate bodies. I'm not sure how I would word it better. \~/
You know... this is utterly ridiculous.
Summary: Anita Discovers Slash. \~/
Okay, I just skimmed ahead and it's all sex and screaming orgasms. It's supposed to be some sort of power fight thingy, but really it's all sex and screaming orgasms. So, I'm going to just copy out some of the funnier lines and sections.
Ah HAH this is all Jean-Claude's fault!
I nodded. He let go, and I fell screaming into the abyss. An abyss of skin and hands and mouths and bodies. My own body was one huge throbbing need. And I didn't particularly care how that need got met.

He explored Auggie first with fingers, and used the wetness of my body to lubricate other places that didn't normally lubricate themselves.
Doesn't that sort of indicate that sometimes they do lubricate themselves?
I came screaming, and it was as if that had been the moment both men had been waiting for, as if they had fought long and hard not to go, and suddenly they could.
And there's much power and it's shared by all of the people connected to Anita and JC and they're all sex happy and glowing. Yay.
Now, normally these things aren't safe for brains, but this one is also NSFW.
Chapter Nine
My knowledge of sex is learned mostly from fan fiction, sex books and things my mother has told me even though I wish she didn't. Therefor, I will fully admit that I know nothing. However, this will not stop me! I'll just comment on the images and things like that. Also, point and laugh.
Raincoats ready?
Our chapter begins with, "The Ardeur came and the clothes went. The custom-made leather knife sheath ripped away with all the rest. We fell to the carpet naked, all hands and mouths."
This is what I see when I read that:

It's this quivering mass of... bloby hands and mouths... no genitals or separate bodies. I'm not sure how I would word it better. \~/
You know... this is utterly ridiculous.
Sucking on [Auggie's] nipple raised his upper body off t he floor, tore a yell from him. His eyes were wide, surprised, his hands reaching for something to hold on to. Someone grabbed one of those reaching hands, and I knew who it was before Auggie drew him into my line of sight. Auggie drew Jean-Claude into him, as he lay back against the floor, and I worked lower on his body. I licked and bit along his stomach, as he drew Jean-Claude down for a kiss. Something I did raised Auggie up off the ground as their mouths touched, so that I had a good view of it. I had never seen two men kiss, not like that. Not with lips, and tongue. In the months that Asher had been in our bed they had moved toward each other a time or two, but stopped. I had never asked whose sensibilities they were saving, mine or theirs. Now, watching Jean-Claude cradling Auggie in his arms and kissing him so thoroughly ... it tightened my body so hard and fast that it was like a mini-orgasm. I'd been told by a very smart friend that to keep saying that I didn't like to be in bed with two men at once was a little silly. A case of the lady protesting too much. My body reacted for me; the sight of them kissing just flat did it for me. I've been told it's how a lot of men feel about seeing two women kiss. Why should I be any different?
Summary: Anita Discovers Slash. \~/
Okay, I just skimmed ahead and it's all sex and screaming orgasms. It's supposed to be some sort of power fight thingy, but really it's all sex and screaming orgasms. So, I'm going to just copy out some of the funnier lines and sections.
I rolled my mouth over that head, then shoved as much of him into my mouth as I could, as fast and hard as I could. It made me come up choking, but it also tore him away from Jean-Claude's mouth. Made Augie stare down at me with wild eyes. I went down on him again, slower, lingering, over the feel of him in my mouth, so ripe, so thick, and how the hard line of that curve felt going down my throat. I watched them both watch me as I did it. Auggie's eyes wide with sensation; Jean-Claude's face full of pleasure, yes, but also pride. His own vampire marks were open enjoy for me to know that he was thinking how long and how hard he had to get to this point.
Ah HAH this is all Jean-Claude's fault!
I nodded. He let go, and I fell screaming into the abyss. An abyss of skin and hands and mouths and bodies. My own body was one huge throbbing need. And I didn't particularly care how that need got met.

He explored Auggie first with fingers, and used the wetness of my body to lubricate other places that didn't normally lubricate themselves.
Doesn't that sort of indicate that sometimes they do lubricate themselves?
I came screaming, and it was as if that had been the moment both men had been waiting for, as if they had fought long and hard not to go, and suddenly they could.
And there's much power and it's shared by all of the people connected to Anita and JC and they're all sex happy and glowing. Yay.
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Date: 2008-03-18 04:32 pm (UTC)