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[kippurbird]

As I'm writing my Fool's story, I've suddenly come to realize that I have a bit of an Edward/Bella Situation with the Fool to be and the Man in White. In this case the Man in White acts much like Edward does towards the Fool, expressing at times how he wants to make the Fool happy and give him everything and then at other times getting down right possessive and creepy.

Sometimes in the same scene. He's all but sneaking into the bedroom to watch the Fool sleep.

Fortunately the Fool to be doesn't find this at all attractive and is scared out of his wits whenever it happens.

As to why he hasn't left? Well, he's trying to. He's really trying to. But when you've got a guy this obsessed over you...

Damn thing is over 25k now.

Comments

[dove-cg.livejournal.com]

Possessively creepy characters can be a lot of fun! It just helps if the author realizes how possessive and creepy they are, that's all. XD

[kippurbird.livejournal.com]

When they start talking about wanting to keep a person and never let them go, yes, that is right about the time you say to your self, "yes, that's creepy".