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I got my first flame today!! I feel like a real fan fiction writer now! It's so wonderful. And it's for, of all the stories, my Jewish Girl Goes to Hogwarts story.




don't you think your overexaggerating just a bit with the jewish part?and
besides this will create
a big chillul hashem so why do this go back to bais yakkov and concentrate on
the halachos a girl should be learning
also this will be a cause for anti-semitisim
(just a thought on the subject)
don't mean to be to hard!
keep on writing


Basically what they're saying, from what my friend/co-worker Haim says, is that I'm blasphering agaisnt G-d and that I should go back to the girls yeshiva and learn the rules and stuff like a good little girl.

Which I'm not... but ^___^

-=-

In other news I played Star Wars last night. Aydin got kicked out of the group. Which meant I didn't do much. He got kicked out of the group for being an ass. See the Jedi's mind tricked him, so he was going to trick them. He went into town and said that the Jedi's had stolen some of his food packs and were using them to sell the salt (which was illigael on the planet were one). Before that I had a run in with a salt dealer who wanted me to be a runner for him. He declined... well he said he'd think about it, and never went back.

Eventually the authorities tried to take the ship, and then the drug runners tried to kill me at the same time because they thought I turned them into the authorities. What resulted was a massacre. The Jedi, being the hypocrites that they were, decided I was out of the group. They dropped me off a Coruscant. (After I astrogated their asses over there) and said good-bye.

So I went off to Corrillia to find my family. Which I did. Mum fainted when she saw me. And there was much rejoycing. (I have to call up Ryan and find out what exactly I learned). I did learn my "real" name though. Zoolan Kiran Aki. After a couple of weeks though of being back home I got sick of it and decided to go and try and figure out how to get back with the group.

I figure maybe apologizing might work. And helping out with the mission.

Date: 2004-07-15 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] forceofhobbit.livejournal.com
. . . but that's not really a flame. It's not punctuated properly, it lacks good grammar, but . . . it's not a flame. Just stupid concrit.

Date: 2004-07-15 06:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kippurbird.livejournal.com
*whimpers*
*bawls*
I'll never get flaaaameeeeed!

Date: 2004-07-15 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] forceofhobbit.livejournal.com
Er . . . *patpats* Don't worry, you'll be flamed someday?

Date: 2004-07-19 12:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charliesmum.livejournal.com
I got a flame once, on one of my HP stories - it was really weird and made no sense. It made me laugh.

Where did you post your Jewish girl story? I have a friend who is Jewish - not sure if he's orthodox, but he keeps kosher and stuff, and I told him about your story, and he wanted to read it. I pointed him to your LJ, but if you have it posted on FF.net or something, let me know, so I can show him.

I like your story. And it sounds to me like the psuydo-flamer looked up a bunch of Yiddish words to make it sound like they know what they are talking about.

Date: 2004-07-19 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kippurbird.livejournal.com
My Harry Potter story is up on FF.net. I'm there under Kippur. It's called Keeping the Faith.... I think. I don't remember now. Glad you're enjoying it. and the Yiddish wasn't made up. It's Hebrew and a co-worker was able to translate it for me. (I work at a Jewish University at their Library.)

Date: 2004-07-19 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mozphoto.livejournal.com
Oy vey.

It's people like that that give Jews who take their beliefs seriously (ie: me) a bad name.

"Be a good girl, never have an original thought in your head, never wear pants or a skirt that goes above the ankle, don't shake hands with men, marry a good hassidisch man who is going to spend 75% of his time studying Torah and the other 25% impregnating you (and of course never gets a job so it's up to YOU to somehow come up with all the money to pay the bills), once you're married you have to keep your hair covered ALL THE TIME, and 2 weeks out of every month you aren't allowed any physical contact whatsoever with your husband."

What a load of crap.

Kippur, bubeleh, that person didn't have a flame, that was a brain-fart.

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